I've lived in a condo in downtown St. Pete for the past three years. It’s the first time I haven’t had a garage—or a parking spot right outside my door—and it took me a while to get used to that.
There’s limited street parking for residents, and most spots are a few blocks away. Even now, I sometimes forget where I parked. And since I mostly walk everywhere, a couple of days might pass before I need the car again.
It used to bother me, not knowing exactly where it was.
Now I find it almost funny.
That’s where this story began—with a memory of my first few weeks here.
Luckily for me, the city stayed exactly where I left it.
Where He Left It
He parked just past the bakery with the blue awning—just beyond the postbox, near the tree. The leaves had tapped against the roof—dry, whispering—like something trying to be heard without interrupting.
The next morning, the tree was still there. But the postbox had shifted. Or the bakery had. The awning was green.
He stood blinking. Not alarmed—just holding the quiet shame of misremembering. He walked a little way, then farther. Found the car near a florist he didn’t recall. Must’ve been distracted. That’s what moving did: turned corners into suggestions.
He’d come to the town because people said it helped. Not with anything specific. Just helped. A place for fresh starts, as if the town itself might cradle what was broken and quietly piece it back together.
The next morning, the car was gone again.
He retraced his steps. The bench with iron slats now faced the other way. The bakery had a yellow awning. The street sloped where it hadn’t.
He found the car three streets over, parked beside a red post box he almost recognized. He got in and sat for a while, before turning the key. He'd taken a photo the night before. Same curb, different shadows. It hadn't helped.
On the third day, he parked with intent. Counted the steps back to the flat. Noted where the pavement lifted near the lamppost. Pressed his thumb along the key’s edge. Reached into his jacket pocket and closed his hand around a folded receipt—creased, unread.
When he returned, the road ran the other way.
He stood still—keys in one hand, the other braced on the doorframe—like he’d forgotten what they were for.
Not metaphorically. The real kind.
The kind of forgetting that makes you write notes and stop recognising your own handwriting.
But the town didn’t feel cruel. It didn’t feel like a trick.
Just… rearranged.
He waited a moment, then asked a man with a shopping bag if the post office had always been next to the bus stop.
“That depends,” the man said, not unkindly. “On when you mean.”
After that, he stopped resisting. Walked more. Stopped keeping track of where he’d left the car.
Some days he found it easily.
Some days it found him.
He moved through the town like water—no longer expecting the ground to stay where he’d left it.
He began to notice patterns. A café would vanish. A gallery would appear in its place. Roads curved where they’d once run straight.
The tree from that first morning—if it was the same one—now stood outside his building. Its branches brushed the roof.
He didn’t wonder anymore.
Sometimes, his hand still drifted to that jacket pocket.
It was always empty now.
One morning, he passed a launderette that hadn’t been there the day before.
A woman was watering plants by the door. She nudged a pot back into place, then looked up.
“Did this used to be something else?” he asked.
She smiled. “Maybe. But it’s this now.”
He didn’t find the car that day.
But he didn’t need it.
He walked.
The town moved with him—not ahead, not behind.
Just slightly open, as if it had been waiting for him to stop searching.
He turned a corner.
A breeze lifted the edge of a napkin on an empty café table.
It wasn’t where he left it.
But it was still there.
P.S.
If you enjoyed this story, I’ve just published a whole collection in a similar key—quiet, reflective, a little off-center.
The Shape of Silence is available now—and currently on sale—on Amazon.
Hi! I was just about to say that this soooo publishable (is that a word) but it looks like you’ve made the leap. I’m doing short stories this semester on my MA. I’d never been a big reader of the form but I’ve really got into them in the last few months. Honestly, this is up there with some of the ones I’ve read that were in our reading list. Absolutely brilliant. Love the quirky subject, the pacing, the imagery. All fantastic. Keep ‘em coming!!
Hi Kate,
Thanks for your kind words! I've always loved writing short stories, although I took a long break from the form, preferring to write poetry.
Last year, I spent 6 months writing my first novel, and I had this big plan to get it (self) published by my birthday in March. Little had I realized just how challenging the editing process would be, and it wasn't until late January when I finally accepted that I wasn't going to make my deadline.
Feeling deflated because I really wanted to meet that goal, I came up with the idea of releasing a collection of my short stories. I had so many. I might give one or two a polish. I might even write one or two new ones to round the book out. Hmmm, little did I know that I would go on a crazy writing tear, and that over the next 6 weeks, I would write 14 new stories, and complete some half-written ones that had been sitting around for 25 years.
Honestly, I was like a man possessed, and while the process was exhausting, it was also a lot of fun. The resulting book, The Shape of Silence, even came out a few days early. Well, the ebook version did... I gave myself grace to sit with it for a while, before doing final edits and getting the revised print version out.
Here's a link to the Kindle version - https://a.co/d/4II0JOf
Also, here's a link to a narrated version of one of the stories from the book. I decided to release the whole book, one story at a time, as I reach subscriber milestones here on Substack. By the time I get to 10,000 subscribers (here my thing big or go home mindset is showing), I'll have narrated the whole book and shared it on here.
https://www.brittleviews.com/p/lucky