I really like the writing style you used for this. it matches it. the prose feels...a bit cold and observant... like the narrator is close enough to feel what’s happening, but still slightly removed from it. just like the narrator describes himself. I look forward to the next part.
Thanks, Hannah. I hadn't really thought about it that way, but you absolutely called it. This is how my second brain sees and processes the world, and when others would reflect that back to me, I used to be confused as to who they were talking about. It’s taken a lifetime for me to really acknowledge, understand, and embrace that duality.
I really like the writing style you used for this. it matches it. the prose feels...a bit cold and observant... like the narrator is close enough to feel what’s happening, but still slightly removed from it. just like the narrator describes himself. I look forward to the next part.
Thanks, Hannah. I hadn't really thought about it that way, but you absolutely called it. This is how my second brain sees and processes the world, and when others would reflect that back to me, I used to be confused as to who they were talking about. It’s taken a lifetime for me to really acknowledge, understand, and embrace that duality.
I noticed because it’s a little different from your usual style so seemed quite intentional